I cant name this poem anything.. it names itself.. :)
for u, i will smile..
for u i will walk a mile.
for u the world will spin.
and these things forever will be in.
my heart and my soul.
something abt u is my all.
there are words that cant speak.
wen emotions go up high on peak.
words will never mean anything now.
but i want u to know, my heart is pumping high.
world may not know.
i may not show.
it will still be there
always, without wear n tear..
i just felt like telling u how i felt.
but i know, i cant, even if i knelt.
on my knees and told u.
how much, and how much u mean to me.
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i found that poignant longing and devotion to the person you addressed real touching..
great work.
i hope that the 'you' in those lines read this... :)
either ways, i hope he likes it.. :)